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The tale of Chinness and Star


This is a love story of two wolves in the Taya Tribe. Join Whizzer's forum, activeboard.com/forum.spark?forumID=124448. It's fun, and also about wolves.

Chinness- A pure black he wolf with pale blue eyes/sky blue eyes. He is shy but very sweet and is the alphaeass.

Star- A silver and gray she wolf with sparkling blue eyes. She is beautiful and is very sweet and is the healer, which is forbidden to mate.


Star padded across the clearing and touched noses with Chinness. Healers were supposed to be kind to everyone, but she accually loved Chinness. "Hey," she whispered to her best friend ever since she was a kit. Her birth mother died giving birth to her and her father died fighting in a war, so Chinnesses mother suckled Star, and accually named her Star. Chinness licked her shoulder, and resonded, "Hey. Wanna go hunting together, if your healer duties doesn't stop u," Star giggled. "I'll be glad to. I just gotta tell Twilight." She walked over to the tribe beta and said, "Twilight, mind if I go hunting?" "Just if you bring back fresh kill!" she answered, jokly. "All right, I will." Star said, while licking the sleek black wolf's shoulder.
Star carried a mouse and a channiff when she smelled Sannin Tribe. "Chinness, do u smell that?" she whispered. There was no reply, so she looked around. He was nowhere to be found. Suddenly, she smelt blood, and realized that Chinness has been wounded!! As fast as she could, she raced over to him and started treating his wounds with all the supplies she could find. "Go home weakling, before our patrol does what we did to that weakling," The Sannnin Tribe aphaeass said, using his nose to point to Chinness, "to you," he treatened. "No," Star repliedd to him firmly, though she was scared. "do whateva u want to me, but I won't leave him." "Star, leave!!" Chinness whispered. "No, Chinness. Do you understand? I love you!" "I love you to, Star, and would do anything to protect you," he coughed. "Please! Leave!" "No!" she sobbed, then started to tend his wounds again. The Sannin Tribe Aplhaeass was about to atack Star when two Taya Tribe patrols came. Twilight gave the battle cry, and the war began.
"Leaf, can u get me some cobbwebs?" Star ordered her apprentice. "What r those 4?" she asked. "To stop the bleeding." Leaf recited. "Good," she said, and Leaf went off. Star was glad she was alone for awhile with Chinness. She had tended all the other wolves wounds, but left Chinness to tend later. "Star, I would sneek out to watch u sleep at night." he whispered. "I watched in aww. I love you." he said. "I know," Star answered. "Healer's always know. "But healer's aren't supposed to be in love! We can't let anyone know we're in love."Then we won't let anyone else know. I love you, and I wouldn't be myself without you," Chinness replied. "If we had pups, we'll be connected forever!!" There was a long pause, then Star whispered, "I already am going to have our pups."



Hope u like it!! I'm going to post the next part l8r.

-- Edited by Panda at 10:45, 2008-08-19

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It's good, I just edited part of it that was a bit innapropriate. it wasnt bad, but i changed it because all stories should follow G ratings. ;) It's a great story, though, I want to read more!

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here is the next part.


"Our pups!" cried Chinness, but then Leaf appeared and gave the cobwebs to Star. "No, Leaf, do it yourself. I think ur ready to treat ur first patient!" Leaf's eyes gleamed with pride, and went to put cobwebs on all of Chinness's wounds. "Now," Leaf said firmly, but had a sparkle in her eye, "Don't you get out of this den until Star or I approve of it!" Chinness laughed and replied warmly, "Well then, you'll have to keep a close eye on me.
The moon was appearing over the mountains, and Leaf and Star were ready to leave for the healer's gathering with each other and Moon Tribe. They do it every half moon, and today, Leaf was to be made a proper healer apprentice. Leaf gave a little wiggle and boasted to her mom, "I'm going to know more about herbs than u!!" Her mom, Saige, the only pure dark brown wolf with brown eyes in the tribe smiled and exclaimed, "You already know more than I do. All I know is that cobwebs stop the bleeding!!"Star's yowl filled Leaf's ear. "C'mon! Leaf, we're going! Hurry or your going to b late!!" Leaf quickly licked her mom's shoulder, and raced after her mentor.
"Will you protect ur tribe, even at the cost of your life?"Star's words rang in Leaf's ears. She remembered how the healer before Star died when a enemy tribe attacked them and Star's mentor saved lives in dat battle, but lost her own. Leaf wanted to be like her, so with one quick nod, Leaf firmly replied, "I do."

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