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Nearly Grown Beagle Puppy

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Sunset [Twilight Fans Read!]


Welcome to Sunset!
By Moonstar

This is my new fan fiction. I apologize if I get tired of writing it eventually, but I have written this story farther than most of my stories start out, so I'm giving it a shot.
Tha chapter are long so I will post parts of the chapters and tell you when a new one begins.

It's about a girl named Ariella who has a fear of dogs, but one night she encounters something very bizarre that she cannot explain...
This is definitely the story for Twilight fans!!!

Please note:
-Since I am posting in sections, the section might end very choppily: at a non-exciting part or something. Some sections might be a little longer read to catch the actual cliffy instead of a non-cliffy. So just bear with the reading please, do not stop reading just beause it's long. D:
-When I copy and paste, it gets rid of all quotation marks and apostrophes. I will add teh quotation marks back in, but will not add the apostrophes since they are not as important. Just bear with it.


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You may post btw.



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Chapter One
Worries


He was scruffy and muddy. His occasional scratching caused me to infer the chance of fleas, not to mention his incessant wheezing, concluding a small cold. I had stopped dead in the trail as soon as his unfamiliar bark entered my ear with no alarm. As his charging, filthy fur, sagging, amber eyes, and harmless, thunderous paws burst into my view, I had become frighteningly aware of the numerous canines prowling my hometown.

You could say ________, Washington is a rainy, soggy land. You would be correct. But it is also calming, peaceful, and although often a little noisier than Id prefer, the charming music of squealing feathered birds, plummeting raindrops, and the squish of your boots colliding into muddy grass is what Ive come accustomed to. And admittedly, I now look forward to every new song added in my lifelong soundtrack.

But here I was, taking a brisk, cheerful walk on an unusually sunny Sunday afternoon in March when suddenly this massive beast lands eyes on me. Just recently I have begun to accept the fact that I am not exceptionally fond of dogs. I recall once when I was seven at my cousins house, their family puppy attacked me in their backyard. I still remember the thrashing fangs, scraping claws and chilling snarls. Its one of those experiences thats so incredibly unspeakable, you force anybody youve ever known to not even tap a finger on the subject.

Its not especially comforting that my older sister, Hannah, adores dogs and offers assistance at the local animal shelter. As youve probably already guessed, I also do not enjoy the stench of wet dog, yet Hannah always enters the house bathed in it. This is not extremely reassuring.

Now that youve heard my lame story, it must be understandable why I was barely breathing while this stray loomed in front of me, his beaming body casting a fearful shadow over the thin pebbled path. I can say with quite certainty that his teeth were dripping. From drool or blood, I dont know. But I wasnt about to take chances. An ear-shattering scream erupted from my dry throat as I whirled around and began to run. I ran and ran, trying to unsuccessfully ignore the thundering paw steps beating steadily behind me.

I didnt want to look behind me, but I ruefully dishonored my conscious as my head mechanically twisted around.

The mutt was rapidly gaining on me. His tongue was whipping out behind him as the air gushed by, twirling his fur in unbelievable motions.  I gasped at his undeniably long, deadly claws that struck the path with every gallop. He could easily rip apart my body with those. He was a rapacious beast, that I was certain. Somehow though, I couldnt help but wonder why he seemed so wolf-like. Simply a unique canine, I assumed.

I was slowing down. My chest heaved in uncontrollable gasps.  My short, choppy breath shot out of my mouth in foggy puffs. Suddenly, I foolishly began to come to a halt.

What are you doing? He'll kill you! My brain screamed, kicking the back of my head for my unbelievable stupidity.  I bit my lip; for I knew what it said was true. Still I couldnt help but edge to a complete, breathless stop. I collapsed on the grass next to the path.

Panting. I heard the recognizable noise of heaving pants. Hot breath exploded onto my neck as I felt a slimy, sandy object slide up to my chin. I squeezed my eyes shut and covered my face, yelping for support. Shivers glided up my spine as I heard pounding footsteps coming near. The last sight I remember confirming is blue sneakers next to me with frantic voices above, and then black clouds spotted my vision. I felt ready to vomit as my eyelids rolled to a close.




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